I quite enjoyed reading your review. It’s always good to get a heads up on a text before you read it yourself.. was this a book you had to read for class? Maybe a little more information in your introduction, so people outside of your class understand a bit more about what you’re learning!
You had a good opening sentence to your review. I wonder if next time you could expand on our comments, for example when you said "some bits were a little gross" that you could give an example of this in your review for the reader. I look forward to reading your next blog. From Mrs A
Hi Ella
ReplyDeleteI quite enjoyed reading your review. It’s always good to get a heads up on a text before you read it yourself.. was this a book you had to read for class? Maybe a little more information in your introduction, so people outside of your class understand a bit more about what you’re learning!
FROM MRS A @ NWS
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ella
You had a good opening sentence to your review. I wonder if next time you could expand on our comments, for example when you said "some bits were a little gross" that you could give an example of this in your review for the reader. I look forward to reading your next blog. From Mrs A